MADDI

This review will be harsh. I leave this warning here because while I don't mean it in any sort of mean spirit, I feel you may be able to wring this into something excellent if reworked. Still, some do not cotton to in-depth criticism, so if that may hurt you, I suggest you not read my words. This is meant in earnest.

to be frank, this feels underbaked. The moral lesson being taught is both fortune-cookie level wisdom, and the struggle to get there isn't so much that it even clicks.

Further, the scenario puts the child in the right to call Maddi a fraud. BECAUSE the lesson is so low-value, it comes off as a cheap excuse, and perhaps malicious in nature. For all I know, I just foolishly helped a god undo the arcane trappings of some curse laid upon her, freeing all manner of awfulness.

To solve this, you could tie the lore into the cards themselves, have each pathway brimming with stories to complete. This could also tie into gameplay in some way, making the theme of goal-building more interesting. To illustrate, say you have a story of someone forming a bakery.

One path tile details their dream, their efforts to learn to cook, the next their efforts to build funding, to get approval for their business, the pitfalls they fall into (fires, food spoilage, etc) for the negative tiles... building on the theme and making the lesson more clear, perhaps even tying into the gameplay management by encouraging players to MAKE these stories.

As for the gameplay, it really feels like it's lacking features. The music quickly gets grating, the entire loop is just about playing a slightly less interesting version of Pipe Dream, and there's a shocking lack of real obstacles and hazards that I came across in my playthrough. why not have tiles that change the direction of other tiles, or move in sequence with your pathing, or are unstable and disappear after a while? To say nothing of enemies, of having to find alternate paths because an ogre blocked your thoroughfare to your next flower. 

There's POTENTIAL in this concept, but as it stands it's not THERE yet. It lacks crucial fun-factor and has some elements that outright discourage playing more than one game, which feels at odds with the moral being taught.

At the begining felt a bit random, but after a few tries, all this tile game worked so smooth and ended up being really satisfactory to have a great run,

Great job for this jam! :D 

Nice tile-path-building game. I successfully completed a run after a few tries. The tiles where you get penalized each time you pass through them are interesting. It's also interesting being able to hold onto tiles in my hand, though sometimes it felt like I had no choice, such as when the tile I just drew is the only playable tile.